PDP And Game Design Document (D2)

My PDP
PDP Draft Copy

My Finished PDP

My PDP Feedback


My Game Design Document

My Game Design Document (draft with comments)

Finished Game Design Document


Evaluation Of My Feedback (PDP)

Some of the feedback I received on my PDP was that the grammar had to be better and mainly things like full stops since most of my writing was just one giant paragraph I implemented this throughout the whole document since this will make it look neater and more of a professional document. another piece of feedback was that the column at the end of my table should be removed and I did this since there was no need for it to be there and would only make it look unfinished. some more feedback was that more detail was need and that the sentence structure would need to be moved around so that it would make more sense I did this because again it makes it look more professional and I was very vague with what I had written in the boxes so it will be more understandable. I was also asked to find out the dates to certain events like dead lines and when we did it if it were possible I was able to get the dead lines however I was unable to find the dates of when we did them these were to be included so that there is a record of how long we did this.

Evaluation Of My Feedback (Game Design Document)

Some feedback I received on my game design document was that punctuation and that there was some missing and the lack of punctuation caused it not to make sense and all of the paragraphs were just one giant sentence so I fixed and added the punctuation so that the document would make sense and that the document would be more professional. another piece of feedback was that my "What Is The Game" section was to vague and didn't really say what the game was so I have edited it so that it is more informative about the game is like so people can understand it better. some more feedback was that some of the paragraphs could have been explained better than they were this because of stuff like typos and lack of punctuation so I have fixed these problems so that they are easy to understand and look more professional. also another piece of feedback I received was that when I mentioned that the enemies change colour it was not clear that the colour change was just cosmetic so I was told to include something like to have it make sense so I have done this since was not clear what the colour change did before. also my game design document was missing my story board and flowchart so I have added theses so that all other documents needed are added.

Game Pitch (D1)

My Game Pitch

with my game pitch I had my power point as a visual aid for people to read and look at the pictures use and I also had a speech to go with my power point which I used to cover anything which was not in the power point but also to go into more detail that the power point could not and a way to make this presentation better would be to try and mention every thing in the power point rather than what I thought was important and also try to put more detail into the power point so if someone is not understanding me they can read the board to maybe understand what I'm trying to get at.